Thursday, 17 December 2020

Ferune Departs Mistwood II

The People Of The Wind, X.

This is worth recording:

while it is still dark, a trumpet sounds;
 
Ferune's sons fly forth, carrying his body on a litter;
 
his uhoths flutter, puzzled by his quietness;
 
his wife, Wharr, leads, flanked by her daughters, their husbands and grown children bearing torches;
 
they join their chothmates;
 
Mistwood Choth rises above the fog between western stars and eastern lightening;

they fly north and as high as is physically possible;

on the horizon, the Weathermother snowpeaks are lit by the rising but still hidden sun;

the Holms follow on gravbelts;

the Ythrians resemble a spearhead led by torchflames;

silence is broken only by throbbing wings;

above wild crags, boulders and streams, the sons hover before their mother, encircled by kin and the wheeling choth;

the sun rises above the mountains;

the new Wyvan blows the horn, calls "Ferune" three times and speaks the words of the two-thousand-year-old New Faith;

body and torches fall;

Wharr leads the dance;

Daniel Holm tells Arinnian, "'And that Terran thought we'd surrender.'" (p. 560) (My emphasis.)

3 comments:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

THROBBING wings? I would have thought we would hear RUSTLING or flapping wings.

Holm is being a bit foolish. Anyone cam be forced to surrender if enough strength and determination is exerted by the stronger side in a war. Esp. if that side thinks what might be won is worth the cost.

Ad astra! Sean

paulshackley2017@gmail.com said...

Sean,

They are climbing as high as they can go.

Paul.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

I noticed tat. But "throbbing" wings still seemed odd.

Ad astra! Sean