Thursday, 12 November 2020

Wild Terai, Then The Milky Way

Orion Shall Ride, CHAPTER NINETEEN.

This post covers three of our four viewpoint characters. See The Four Meet.

First, would you like to meet survivalist Terai on a dark night? He is:

gaunt
weathered
scarred
unshorn
unwashed
wearing pungent woolens and untanned skins tied with sinew
changing them only when they become stiff
grasping a rabbit stick
a pouch of cutting and throwing stones at his waist
food in a woven carrier on his back
shocking even to the poorest outback savage
 
Elsewhere, Iern and Ronica, now a couple, walk under a clear sky:
 
"The Milky Way shone aloft, and again in an ebon mirror of water. Brilliances crowded around it. And mightily over the eastern range came striding that winter constellation called Orion." (5, p. 344)

3 comments:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

I would rather NOT meet Terai on a dark night in any but the most amicable circumstances!

And I think you meant "Wild TERAI, Then The Milky Way," and not "Iern."

Ad astra! Sean

paulshackley2017@gmail.com said...

Very easy to mix up characters' names in a long novel.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

True! And I was kind of waiting for you to notice the mistake!

Ad astra! Seam