Sunday 18 August 2019

"An insult."

While in Happy Mount Park, Morecambe, with my daughter and granddaughter, I drank coffee, read ahead in Poul Anderson's Perish By The Sword and took some notes.

This sentence will seem familiar to Poul Anderson fans:

"And now sunlight spilled across a windy world, and clouds were quick and bright in the sky." (7, p. 65)

An accomplished author always finds new word combinations to describe perennial phenomena: sunlight; wind; clouds; the sky. However, I have quoted only the opening sentence of this paragraph. The following phrase, not grammatically a sentence because it lacks a predicate, is:

"An insult." (ibid.)

Here we read the human reaction. The suffering viewpoint character resents the "'...beautiful day...'" (p. 66) because it contrasts with his inner state.

As Gerard Manley Hopkins wrote:

Lovely the woods, waters, meadows, combes, vales,
All the air things wear that build this world of Wales;        10
  Only the inmate does not correspond:
-copied from here.

1 comment:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

That last line you quoted from Hopkins is rather odd. Of course I realized it was partly forced on Hopkins for technical, poetical reasons, such rhyming. And Hopkins was simply saying the viewpoint narrator of the poem felt unable to FEEL the beauty he described.

Sean