Friday, 27 October 2017

Meanwhile

A fictional realm gains depth and solidity when its readers learn what is happening in different places at the same time:

in Robert Heinlein's Future History Vol II, an accident occurring in one story is mentioned in another;

in Poul Anderson's Technic History, John Ridenour, who had been on Starkad with Dominic Flandry, visits Freehold while Chunderban Desai, working on Aeneas, reads an intelligence report written by Dominic Flandry;

in SM Stirling's Emberverse series, one volume describes a "Quest" whereas the following volume tells us what had been happening back home meanwhile.

The central character of some installments can be mentioned tangentially in others:

Heinlein's astrogators refer to old man Harriman;

in the Technic History, one character has seen Nicholas van Rijn on their equivalent of television;

in a later period, another character has heard of the exploits of Admiral Flandry.

These observations are inspired by a tantalizing passage in Ian Fleming's The Spy Who Loved Me. Uniquely in this novel by Fleming, the heroine narrates for nine chapters before she even meets James Bond. However, she does tell us this:

"I was still living with Susan. She had got a job with the Foreign Office in something called 'Communications', about which she was very secretive, and she had a boy-friend from the same department..."
-Ian Fleming, The Spy Who Loved Me (London, 1980), Chapter Four, p. 50.

As the Japanese say, just so.

4 comments:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

I remember that report Commissioner Desai read! Something about his meeting with Aycharaych (pretending to be from a remote, obscure planet of the Empire) made Desai uneasy. So, he requested Terra to send him any known facts about Aycharaych. But, it was not exactly a report from Flandry that he read. Rather, Desai read a letter quoting Flandry.

Sean

paulshackley2017@gmail.com said...

Sean,
I think it is neat how Fleming reminds us that the work of the Secret Service continues while Viv recounts her private life - and Anderson reminds us of Flandry while Desai reads his correspondence.
Paul.

S.M. Stirling said...

Yup, it's a major weakness if it feels like everything else fades out or is frozen when the p.o.v. character isn't on stage.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul and Mr. Stirling!

Paul, I agree! What authors as different from each other as Fleming, Anderson, Tolkien and Stirling did to was to skillfully show us what was going on with the other characters in their books besides what was happening with the major POV character.

Mr. Stirling, I agree! And I admire how carefully you go back and forth to show us what was happening to both major and secondary but important characters in your books.

Sean