Wind Gone Cold

The Avatar, XXIII.

Joelle and Eric end their relationship:

"He walked out into a wind gone cold at evening." (p. 204)

Of course this wind is not warm but cold... Should I stop quoting passages in which the wind comments on human affairs? A recognizable style could easily be parodied.

Alternatively, an attentive author would be able to write sequels or imitations close in style to the originals:

descriptions of skies, sunsets, seas and landscapes;

appeals to three or more of the senses;

descriptions of stars and galaxies seen from space;

sudden moments of realization, not explained until later;

competent heroes;

sympathetic treatment of their antagonists;

a positive evaluation of freedom and diversity;

the wind...