I have not experienced war but am confident that it is as described by Harry Turtledove in "The Last Word." Men scream. Anyone who says afterwards that he was not terrified is either a liar or a psychopath.
"War was always the same: not a neat affair of lines across maps, nor a hallooing gallantry, but men who gasped and sweated and bled in bewilderment."
-Poul Anderson, "Delenda Est" IN Anderson, Time Patrol (Riverdale, NY, 2006), pp. 173-228 AT p. 223.
("Delenda Est" is the story about Carthaginian victory in the Second Punic War. Thus, a single text presents both historical speculation and authentic experience.)
In "The Last Word," Janissary Sergeant Hans lives and dies for war. His grandfathers defended Reich and Fuhrer against Draka and lost so now he leads a squad for the Draka - and does not worry about it. He recognizes that his chance of living long enough to retire is low but shrugs. Having led his men into a Yankee holdout ambush, he knows that he will be court-martialled and wonders how he had missed those Yankee bastards but:
"Then a grenade burst half a meter in front of his face, and such questions became academic." (Drakas!, p. 255)
Hans must die instantaneously. Thus, he does not know that the explosion was caused by a grenade and does not reflect that his questions have become academic. All or most of the quoted sentence is not Hans' point of view but the voice of the omniscient narrator.
Anson MacDonald (Robert Heinlein) finds ground combat even more chaotic, frightening and frightful than expected. Heinlein is shown adhering to his principles while experiencing, and accepting, what happens to the infantry. He refers to the starship, New America, whose captain, we know, is Anderson... Thus, both of these seminal sf writers are in different ways involved in the war against the Draka.
What a pity that MacDonald was not booby-trapped to take his Draka captor with him.
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Showing posts with label "The Last Word" by Harry Turtledove. Show all posts
Thursday, 28 January 2016
POVs And Deaths
When a viewpoint character dies, three things can happen:
we follow the character into a hereafter (this can happen in fantasy);
the narrative ends abruptly, even in mid-sentence;
the omniscient narrator continues the narrative, however briefly.
Thus, when Chen dies:
"Impact. Nothing."
-SM Stirling, Drakon (New York, 2000), p. 372.
Chen feels the impact, then the narrator informs us that there was nothing.
When Gwendolyn Ingolfsson dies:
"A moment of white light. Nothing." (p. 391)
Gwen sees the white light, then the narrator informs us that there was nothing.
Harry Turtledove describes Anson MacDonald's last moment:
"The poison worked almost as fast as they'd promised. He nodded before everything faded. He'd even got the last word."
-Harry Turtledove, "The Last Word" IN SM Stirling, Ed., Drakas! (Riverdale, NY, 2000), pp. 249-293 AT p. 293.
MacDonald reflects that he got the last word before everything fades.
When Rugo, the last native on a colonized extrasolar planet, drowns:
"He wondered if his mother would come for him."
-Poul Anderson, "Terminal Quest" IN Anderson, Alight In The Void (New York, 1993), pp. 1-28 AT p. 28.
Then a concluding paragraph describes the river flowing:
"...down in the valley, where the homes of men are built." (ibid.)
Men have conquered the planet.
There must by many other moments of death in Anderson's works?
we follow the character into a hereafter (this can happen in fantasy);
the narrative ends abruptly, even in mid-sentence;
the omniscient narrator continues the narrative, however briefly.
Thus, when Chen dies:
"Impact. Nothing."
-SM Stirling, Drakon (New York, 2000), p. 372.
Chen feels the impact, then the narrator informs us that there was nothing.
When Gwendolyn Ingolfsson dies:
"A moment of white light. Nothing." (p. 391)
Gwen sees the white light, then the narrator informs us that there was nothing.
Harry Turtledove describes Anson MacDonald's last moment:
"The poison worked almost as fast as they'd promised. He nodded before everything faded. He'd even got the last word."
-Harry Turtledove, "The Last Word" IN SM Stirling, Ed., Drakas! (Riverdale, NY, 2000), pp. 249-293 AT p. 293.
MacDonald reflects that he got the last word before everything fades.
When Rugo, the last native on a colonized extrasolar planet, drowns:
"He wondered if his mother would come for him."
-Poul Anderson, "Terminal Quest" IN Anderson, Alight In The Void (New York, 1993), pp. 1-28 AT p. 28.
Then a concluding paragraph describes the river flowing:
"...down in the valley, where the homes of men are built." (ibid.)
Men have conquered the planet.
There must by many other moments of death in Anderson's works?
Shared Universes
Poul Anderson had a knack of writing stories set inside other authors' fictional universes. In "The Last Word," Harry Turtledove does this with SM Stirling's Draka and their Janissaries. Turtledove knows how these guys think and speak. A sixth-generation Zulu Janissary spoke:
"...in accents that might almost have belonged to a von Shrakenberg." (Drakas!, pp. 253-254)
We know what that means if we are familiar with the series.
Turtledove also understands Anson MacDonald:
"'Better for Americans to die as free men than to live as slaves.'" (p. 257)
"'We've got no magic way to throw the Snakes back across the Atlantic. We can't very well start a new religion and go crusading against them.'" (ibid.)
In Heinlein's The Day After Tomorrow, Americans do overthrow invaders by starting a new religion. And, I have just remembered, references to chess are common to The Day After Tomorrow and "The Last Word." It will take me a long time to penetrate such a rich text.
"...in accents that might almost have belonged to a von Shrakenberg." (Drakas!, pp. 253-254)
We know what that means if we are familiar with the series.
Turtledove also understands Anson MacDonald:
"'Better for Americans to die as free men than to live as slaves.'" (p. 257)
"'We've got no magic way to throw the Snakes back across the Atlantic. We can't very well start a new religion and go crusading against them.'" (ibid.)
In Heinlein's The Day After Tomorrow, Americans do overthrow invaders by starting a new religion. And, I have just remembered, references to chess are common to The Day After Tomorrow and "The Last Word." It will take me a long time to penetrate such a rich text.
Wednesday, 27 January 2016
Another Literary Reference
SM Stirling, Ed., Drakas! (New York, 2000).
(See image. "INGSOC" is Newspeak for "English Socialism.")
And here is another literary reference, on the second page of "The Last Word" by Harry Turtledove in Drakas!:
"What had that Englishman called the Snakes? A boot in the face of mankind forever - something like that, anyhow." (p. 250)
And that is how O'Brien of the Thought Police describes the future to Winston Smith in George Orwell's 1984:
He is entirely honest about the brutal cynicism of the Party; the Party does not seek power to do anything good, but simply to revel in that power: "Always, Winston, at every moment, there will be the thrill of victory, the sensation of trampling on an enemy who is helpless. If you want a picture of the future, imagine a boot stomping on a human face — forever."
-copied from here.
Very appropriate for the Draka: Orwell would have said it of them in their timeline.
In HG Wells' The Time Machine, bourgeoisie and proletarians devolve into different species. In Orwell's 1984, a Party makes a revolution, then freezes society into a new dictatorship forever. Turtledove's MacDonald refers to Orwell as "...that Englishman..." and Poul Anderson's Caleb Wallis refers to Wells as "'...a young Englishman in the '90's...'"
-Poul Anderson, There Will Be Time (New York, 1973), p. 73.
(See image. "INGSOC" is Newspeak for "English Socialism.")
And here is another literary reference, on the second page of "The Last Word" by Harry Turtledove in Drakas!:
"What had that Englishman called the Snakes? A boot in the face of mankind forever - something like that, anyhow." (p. 250)
And that is how O'Brien of the Thought Police describes the future to Winston Smith in George Orwell's 1984:
He is entirely honest about the brutal cynicism of the Party; the Party does not seek power to do anything good, but simply to revel in that power: "Always, Winston, at every moment, there will be the thrill of victory, the sensation of trampling on an enemy who is helpless. If you want a picture of the future, imagine a boot stomping on a human face — forever."
-copied from here.
Very appropriate for the Draka: Orwell would have said it of them in their timeline.
In HG Wells' The Time Machine, bourgeoisie and proletarians devolve into different species. In Orwell's 1984, a Party makes a revolution, then freezes society into a new dictatorship forever. Turtledove's MacDonald refers to Orwell as "...that Englishman..." and Poul Anderson's Caleb Wallis refers to Wells as "'...a young Englishman in the '90's...'"
-Poul Anderson, There Will Be Time (New York, 1973), p. 73.
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