Saturday, 5 September 2026
Ayres And Eyre
Rescue Followed By Recuperation On Both Rustum And Avalon
Friday, 4 September 2026
Sequel
In any case, the first story in New America is a logical sequel to the fourth and concluding story in Orbit Unlimited:
Danny Coffin is no longer a small boy but a teenager;
Danny had a harrowing experience in the Rustumite lowlands so does not want to return there;
however, unlike most Rustumites, he is able to live comfortably in lowland conditions, therefore he is in demand there!;
thus, a human problem in an sf setting.
I certainly appreciate both the setting and the problem but would not have been able to create a story based on them whereas Poul Anderson was. Our next step here is to reread this fifth Rustum History instalment maybe some time this weekend.
Computer And Continuum
Thursday, 3 September 2026
An Unwilling Hero
Orbit Unlimited, part four, 9.
On Rustum, Mayor Theron Wolfe explains to Jan Svoboda why he, Wolfe, has pressured Svoboda into becoming a hero:
"'Now that the initial struggle to survive is past, each family has retreated more and more into its own selfish concerns. We can't have that. Man can't live alone. The lost, the sick, the weak, and poor have got to be helped, or how can we depend on their help when our own luck runs out?'" (p. 157)
Too right. Those who believe that morality is a list of divine commands ask secularists where we get our morality from. I reply that we have been naturally selected to help others either because they bear the same genes or because they might help us in return and that we experience this latter motivation as moral obligation, not as calculating self-interest, which is what it sounds like if it is expressed in purely evolutionary terms as I have just done. But there is also a countervailing tendency towards narrow self-interest and Wolfe schemes to shame Rustumites out of this!
(If you see children suffering, do you think, "This must not happen to any children?" or "This must not happen to my children?" The latter can entail that whatever it is must continue happening to someone else's children.)
Wolfe's manipulativeness matches that of Mayor John Amalfi in James Blish's Cities In Flight.
Malevolence?
Orbit Unlimited, part four, 8.
We have read about Joshua Coffin praying that God's will be done. But there is another way to look at it.
Coffin's companion, Jan Svoboda:
"Defeat rose in Svoboda's throat like vomit. He told the knowledge over and over, a kind of litany to the malevolent God who had arranged matters in precisely this way." (p. 150)
SM Stirling has argued in earlier comboxes on this blog that we have been naturally selected to discern motives in each other - one man approaches with a smile, another with a frown - and, as an extension of this, we also attribute motives to non-human phenomena. Our ancestors tried to placate gods of the weather.
Many of us now think, on scientific and philosophical grounds, that the causes of natural events do not include any "will," whether benevolent, malevolent or inscrutable.
Coffin and Svoboda can, if they want, argue the matter after the event.
Forgotten Details
Orbit Unlimited, part four.
How many details do we remember out of all the books that we have read? For example, how did Danny Coffin wind up in a spearfowl's nest? Did the spearfowl grab him and carry him up there?
No. When a tusked animal chased Danny, he ran to a crag and climbed up it, causing a landslide that frightened away the animal but made it impossible for Danny to climb back down again. Fortunately, the spearfowl was away from home when Danny fell asleep in its nest. When the bird did return, Danny's would-be rescuers, his father and Jan Svoboda, were close enough so that it had to check on them before landing.
Svoboda gets close, although not close enough, with climbing equipment and an exploding piton wakens Danny. How the two men do rescue him is described in Rescue On Rustum. All the details fit together. It is just a matter of rereading them.
The Forever Wind
Orbit Unlimited, part four, 7.
Joshua Coffin and Jan Svoboda continue their search for Coffin's lost son, Danny, and the wind continues to punctuate Poul Anderson's account of their activities.
(i) When Svoboda strikes a cigarette and Coffin wishes that this good fellow would not poison himself:
"The wind ruffled Svoboda's hair, as it did the leaves at their backs and the grasses beneath." (p. 140)
An unthreatening wind on this occasion. Indeed, it ruffles that good fellow's hair!
(ii) While their conversation continues:
Wednesday, 2 September 2026
The Flood And A Realization
Orbit Unlimited, part four.
We noted Joshua Coffin's confused references to "the gods" and "the Lord" but did not sufficiently highlight that "...for it repented the Lord that He had made man..." is, of course, a significant Biblical quotation.
The opening sentence of section 7:
"The crisis came late in the afternoon." (p. 137)
- promises a crisis. However, there is such a long build-up that, in my time frame, that crisis will have to wait until tomorrow!
Coffin has some sort of moment of realization. Something strikes him so that he stops and gasps and Svoboda asks what the matter is. However, this time, the realization is not of the solution to a practical problem. Instead, it is a proper appreciation of Coffin's own wife, Teresa, who has shown him that not only survival and honour but also kindness is necessary. And he has had to descend into the lowland to realize this.
Maybe we would benefit from reading something more about inner personal changes?
Dialogue With God
See:
Thy Will (13 July 2021)
Thy Will (5 March 2025)
Joshua Coffin prays:
"Thy will be done." (7, p. 137)
However, he effectively engages in dialogue with God like a Hebrew prophet. First, he thanks God when lowland fruit proves to be edible because this seems to mean:
"...that He who fed the children of Israel in the wilderness would not let Danny die..." (ibid.)
(Recap: Coffin and Svoboda are searching the Rustumite lowlands for Coffin's lost son.)
Secondly, however, God's help seems to be withdrawn. Not finding his lost son yet, Coffin is compelled to struggle on through vines and thorns. Consequently, he reinterprets the edible fruit not as help but as a command. God has made it possible to continue searching through this hellish environment. Therefore:
"...His servant Joshua must continue to do so." (ibid.)
The name, "Joshua," makes this all the more Biblical.
Thirdly, he wonders whether he is mad to think that God had designed the Rustumite environment with him in mind. But, in any case, he must continue to do his duty.
This is prophetic dialogue. God's will can be reinterpreted but must not be doubted.
Life And Death
Fiction reflects life. Lives have turning points whether recognized or not. In Poul Anderson's A Knight Of Ghosts And Shadows, Dominic Flandry's murdered fiancee, Kossara Vymezal, lies in state in St Clement's Cathedral on Dennitza. She believed. He does not. He asks her for a sign that she still exists. This makes him the first person to pray to St Kossara, later canonized by her fellow Orthochristians. Flandry hears only a priest chanting and does not interpret this as a sign. Brains/minds/souls process experiences differently. Some Dennitzans would feel their faith strengthened. Others would doubt. A Catholic colleague in Merseyside who had lost her young son was later asked about her faith and replied, "That's all gone now."
Any hypothetical greater consciousness observes Flandry and my former colleague with compassion.
Exercise: Find three more turning point moments in Poul Anderson's works.
Tuesday, 1 September 2026
Giving Thanks
In Poul Anderson's works:
Monday, 31 August 2026
Ginnungagap
The idea of a primordial, pre-cosmic, void connects mythology and science - and preeminently so in Poul Anderson's works, as the previous blog posts demonstrate.
In our current rereading, Svoboda and Coffin are still climbing down that Cleft but we will accompany them no further tonight. I will shortly switch on the TV to learn whether - in our timeline - World War III has started yet.
More About POV's
Orbit Unlimited, part four.
("pov" = point of view.)
I said before that Svoboda remains the viewpoint character in section 5. Careful reading confirms this. A single sentence:
"Svoboda was glad to oblige." (p. 126)
- is ambiguous. It could mean either that Svoboda felt glad (Svoboda's pov) or that he was visibly glad and obliging as observed by his companion (Coffin's pov). However, the immediately preceding sentence is:
"Coffin seemed eager to talk impersonally." (ibid.)
Here we are not told directly what Coffin wanted (Coffin's pov) but what he seemed (to someone else) to want (Svoboda's pov). And this confirms that "Svoboda was glad..." is also Svoboda's pov.
A friend who reads a lot of fiction told me that he never notices points of view but surely he must be aware of them without realizing that he is?
All of this matters. When two people, A and B, disagree and argue about what happened during an incident at which both were present, they can be insufficiently aware of the distinctions between (i) A's pov, (ii) B's pov and (iii) the total event which is more complex than either person's perceptions. Communication can fail completely. How often does this happen?
Improbabilities
Coffin And Svoboda In The Wind
Orbit Unlimited, part four.
Physical features of Coffin's and Svoboda's descent into the Cleft are wind, water and lifelessness:
quick, violent, booming winds dash the rising, roiling fog against the men but do not disperse it;
there are trickles, rivulets, springs and waterfalls but no plants.
Regular Anderson readers expect the wind but should also notice the other features!
When Svoboda says something that his companion does not appreciate:
"Coffin clamped his jaws. There was stillness except for the rush and whistle of wind, the dripping and chuckling of water. When he had himself under control, he said in a flat voice, 'Why?...'" (p. 124)
As ever, wind underlines a conversational silence although this time it is accompanied by water. Coffin getting himself under control might read as though the narrative point of view has shifted to him but it has not. Coffin's effort at self-control is visible to Svoboda who remains the viewpoint character of this section. I prefer Svoboda's perspective to Coffin's but that is my judgement speaking. Poul Anderson shows us very different characters for us to assess or argue about.
Coffin And Svoboda
Orbit Unlimited, part four.
At the end of section 4, Joshua Coffin:
longs to be back in space;
experiences burning eyes;
tries to stand but lacks will and strength;
feels that nothing matters;
overhears a conversation behind a closed door;
stands on the second attempt;
goes to a window and stares out;
hates Rustum;
despises Jan Svoboda;
feels guilt;
is baffled by Svoboda's merriment with his accuser, Wolfe.
Thus, Coffin is the viewpoint character of this passage.
The opening paragraph of section 5 describes:
"The east side of the tableland called High America..." (p. 12)
At the end of the second paragraph, Svoboda looks with awe. Thus, we are now in the viewpoint of the man whom Coffin had despised even though the two men are now walking together down into the Cleft that splits the cliffs. Coffin's voice is loud and ugly to Svoboda. This happens all the time. We perceive others who perceive us. However, in real life, each of us is directly acquainted with only one viewpoint, his own, whereas, in fiction, the omniscient narrator can show us Coffin's viewpoint in section 4 and Svoboda's in section 5. Novelists have been developing these techniques since the seventeenth century.
Sunday, 30 August 2026
The Daily Life Of The Future II
Orbit Unlimited, part four.
What details have we already noted? See Some Details On Rustum. (I was bound to have noticed Joshua Coffin's reference to Lazarus.)
Although Jan Svoboda thinks of the airbus that he flies as "...this old rattletrap...," (p. 97) it and others like it are:
"...still so scarce and expensive as to be publicly owned..." (p. 100)
Svoboda, an engineer on Earth, is an iron miner on Rustum and has built his house beside the line that carries ore from his pit to the steel mill. In his garden, a phoenix nest lit by luminous fungi is "...like a goblin lantern." (p. 114). I am picking out colourful or notable details but there is much more where this came from.
"The wind, slow and heavy, rustled withering leaves with a sound which was not like October in New England, nor like anything Earth had ever heard." (ibid.)
Poul Anderson always tells us what the wind is doing: "...slow and heavy..." matches the mental states of his characters at this stage of the narrative. Although this wind is not October in New England, merely mentioning this does evoke October in New England! (Ray Bradbury, very unlike Anderson, has an evocative title, The October Country.)
There is more pathetic fallacy with the wind:
"The wind ruffled a loose lock of Mother's hair and made the trees sigh around her voice. She talked low and carefully..." (p. 103)
Appropriately, this wind, not heavy, makes the trees sigh around Mrs Coffin's low voice. Even casual readers must be subliminally affected by Anderson's fully integrated texts.
Isaac's Universe
For this universe that was to be used by other authors, Asimov specified five intelligent extra-solar species: