Thursday, 20 August 2020

Narration And Commentary

(Trouble with uploading images, hopefully to be resolved soon.) (It was.)

Except in first person narratives, Poul Anderson follows the literary convention of an omniscient narrator who knows the innermost thoughts of a viewpoint character but who presents only one such character at a time. Occasionally, by using the pronoun, "we," the narrator reveals himself to be not omniscient but a contemporary of the fictional characters.

There is an older literary convention of a first person narrator who is not one of the characters but who comments on them, e.g.:

"I would not like to accuse a man in Curry's position of misreading a letter..."
-CS Lewis, That Hideous Strength IN Lewis, The Cosmic Trilogy (London, 1990), pp. 349-753 AT CHAPTER 1, p. 367.

"I am not suggesting for a moment that the Bursar of Bracton was in any way misrepresenting the position." (p. 370)

There is another good one but I am having the usual difficulty finding it. This kind of narrator is a vehicle for ironic humor. For more on Lewis' treatment of points of view, see The Ransom Trilogy.

Addendum: After much enjoyable rereading, I have found the other "good one":

"I hope the reader has not been misled into supposing that the Fellows of Bracton were a specially distinguished body."
-CHAPTER 3, p. 403.

1 comment:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

I think "The Problem of Pain" shows us Anderson using a first narrator who is not one of the characters in the story proper but who does comment on at least one of those characters. And I'm sure I could find others, as well.

Ad astra! Sean