After Doomsday, 13.
For each repeated line in "The Battle of Brandobar," we should see an appropriate image or hear a corresponding sound-effect. Thus:
"(The stars burn bitterly clear)" (pp. 103, 104, 104, 105, 105, 106, 107, 108, 108)
- the Milky Way seen from space.
"(The stormwinds clamor their grief)" (pp. 103, 104, 104, 105, 105, 106, 107, 108, 108)
- a very loud wind.
"(A bugle: the gods defied!)" (pp. 103, 104, 104, 105, 106, 107, 107, 108)
- a very loud bugle.
"(New centuries scream in birth)" (pp. 104, 104, 104, 105, 106, 107, 108, 108)
- the cry of a new-born baby.
And then, in the concluding quatrain:
"(New centuries sing in birth)" (p. 109)
- a beautiful voice singing;
- which should also accompany the concluding line:
"In the name of living Earth!" (p. 109)
The ballad could be effective on screen.
(Other reading: starting the eleventh Inspector Morse novel.)
2 comments:
Kaor, Paul!
That cry of a new-born baby should be magnified, be very loud, a true scream.
Ad astra! Sean
Yes, we should be shocked and challenged by each sound-effect.
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