Warm, windless weather;
creaking, splashing sweeps;
coxswain's drumbeat;
blue wavelets, glittering, chuckling and swirling;
dazzling water blurring sight;
"...trade through the known world..." (p. 230);
multi-storey houses of stone or cedar;
bustling piers;
list descriptions of men and their activities;
Tyrian dyes;
rolling sounds;
overwhelming vitality;
crippled beggars;
ancient Eastern smells.
There is more.
3 comments:
Kaor, Paul!
Exactly the kind of details bored, semi-literate "readers" hate.
Ad astra! Sea
Leaves out the stink...
Kaor, Mr. Stirling!
Almost all cities, from ancient into modern times, were stinky. Just think of the Great Manure Crisis of the late 19th century!
Ad astra! Sean
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