Friday, 17 June 2022

Three Similes And Two Metaphors

The Shield Of Time, PART FOUR, 13,211 B. C., VI, p. 216.

A simile is comparative whereas a metaphor is non-literal.

On a single page:

"Like a hawk upon a lemming, there the invaders were."

"The courage spilled from him like water from a cupped hand flung open."

"Surf growled afar, as if the Bear Spirit spoke in anger."

If we remove similes and metaphors, then we are left with something like:

"There the invaders were."

"His courage ended."

"Surf sounded afar."

In Poul Anderson's text, we appreciate both the narrative and the language.

1 comment:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

Without the use of similes, metaphors, analogies, etc., a writer is all too likely to find his work becoming flat, plain, colorless, BORING to read. The monochromatic writing of Isaac Asimov's stories was one reason why I became so dissatisfied with them.

Ad astra! Sean