Monday 27 January 2014

Alliteration And Humanity

"How grossly ungrateful, no glory goes ever
"To us who do also face anger-swung edges,
"That tales of the deeds may be talked of in towns,
"We careful recorders, we war correspondents..."
- Poul Anderson and Gordon R Dickson, Star Prince Charlie (New York, 1976), p. 154.

Awesome, amazing and astonishing alliteration, even involving internal letters and sounds.

Line 1: 4 g's and 4 r's, including 2 gr's, and 2 s sounds.
Line 2: 5 s sounds and 1 rhyme.
Line 3: 4 t's and 3 s's.
Line 4: 3 w's, including 2 we's, 3 c's, 6 r sounds and 2 s's.

Again, the text transcends humor when Charlie realizes that, "...regardless of biology..." (p. 150),  the comical New Lemurians are intelligent, sensitive, brave and basically decent, therefore are men and women with human rights. As it happens, his interstellar civilization, the Interbeing League, already recognizes this, which is precisely why there is a rule of non-interference that Charlie has been drawn into transgressing - although, as someone asked about Star Trek, if they do not interfere, then how can there be a story?

"In spite of his growing distrust of Dzenko, Charlie had to admire the noble. Calm and self-possessed, he went about his work as if it were routine, not a clash which would decide the fate of the kingdom and his own life or death." (p. 149)

We know that Dzenko's motives are far from disinterested. Thus, some of what I am about to write is not applicable. Nevertheless, in his conduct of the battle, Dzenko sounds like a karma yogi (one who controls thought though action) as described to Arjuna by Krishna in the Bhagavad Gita:

do your duty;

attend fully to each task, undistracted either by desire for success and praise or by fear of failure and blame;

if you are a theist, then offer each act to God (laborare est orare, to work is to pray), although Buddhists may also practice "working meditation."

One hero of the Roman Republic, summoned by the Senate to lead an army, left his farm, led the army to victory, reported back to the Senate, then returned to his farm. He did not make the mistake of Marius who went disastrously into politics on the strength of having been successful as a general. That Republican hero, whose name I forget, sounds like a Pagan karma yogi.

Meanwhile, back to Star Prince Charlie's predicament, we expect some treachery from Dzenko before the end of the novel. When he has become king, he will no longer need the Prince of the Prophecy.

8 comments:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Hi, Paul!

I've read STAR PRINCE CHARLIE two or three times and one of the things in that book which esp. struck me is the poetry in it. The line about "We careful recorders, we war correspondents" makes me laugh!

I am somehat uneasy about calling any non human rational beings "men and women," however. Of course most New Lemurians are intelligent, sensitive, brave, and basically decent. Even Dzenko, as you noted, has many good qualities. But I would prefer to prefer to call non human xenosophonts "beings," rather than use terms which runs the risk of anthropomorphizing them too much. Such beings will be PEOPLE, with precisely the same rights we have, but not HUMANS.

Hope I was not too unclear!

Sean

Paul Shackley said...

I agree with that terminology.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Hi, Paul!

Thanks! And I like how Poul Anderson has coined words like "xenosophont" for situations where humans meet non humans.

Have you ever heard of Mary Doria Russell and her books THE SPARROW and CHILDREN OF GOD? I thought them very interesting nad thought provoking. But one objection I have to them is how she uses terms like "men," "women," etc., for non human rational beings. It jarred on me as not right.

Sean

Paul Shackley said...

No, not familiar with.

Anonymous said...

I've read those books, and also DOC and A THREAD OF GRACE. I believe there's more Russell out there that I ought to read.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Hi, Nicholas!

I'm glad you too have read the Russell books I cited. I'm not sure I would agree with how she handled everything in those books, but they were certainly worth reading. And I definitely do object to using terms like "men" and "women" for non human rational beings. To do so runs the risk of anthropomophizing aliens too far, which can lead to making very dangerous mistakes. If I'm recalling rightly, that's exactly what happened in THE SPARROW and CHILDREN OF GOD. Hmmm, maybe that's one of the things Mrs. Russell was trying to do!

Have not read either DOC or THREAD OF GRACE. So much to read, and so impossible to read everything!

Sean

Jim Baerg said...

"One hero of the Roman Republic, summoned by the Senate to lead an army, left his farm, led the army to victory, reported back to the Senate, then returned to his farm. He did not make the mistake of Marius who went disastrously into politics on the strength of having been successful as a general. That Republican hero, whose name I forget, sounds like a Pagan karma yogi."

Sounds like Cincinnatus
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lucius_Quinctius_Cincinnatus
Apparently George Washington was likened to Cincinnatus because he resigned from military leadership after the success of the US revolutionary war, & resigned from the presidency rather than accept a 3rd term.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Jim!

Just a small mistake: George Washington did not resign from the US Presidency, he left office after holding it for two full four year terms. That did set a precedent for the belief a US President should not hold office for more than two terms.

Ad astra! Sean