Monday, 28 October 2024

Seasons

An author can tell us in a single word that a year has elapsed or alternatively can evoke the passage of time by recounting the passage of the seasons:

"That summer blazed up into fall, winter came, spring, and summer again, while we made ready. Our last year on Harbor."
-"Gypsy," p. 269.

"The days turned to weeks and spring turned to summer...
"Autumn came suddenly and still he had not made a move. When it got colder he bought an electric heater..."
-Stieg Larsson, The Girl Who Kicked The Hornets' Nest (London, 2010), p. 730.

We appreciate the passage of time more with a longer description. We realize how much preparation is necessary before leaving Harbor and it is restful to read about Larsson's fugitive character in hiding:

"...staring out of the window, day after day, week after week."
-Larsson, op. cit., p. 731 -

- while only seconds elapse for us as readers.

1 comment:

Sean M. Brooks said...

Kaor, Paul!

Albeit it was probably both boring and terrifying for that fugitive character, till weeks of nothing happening took the edge off that fear.

Ad astra! Sean