Thursday, 4 September 2025

Contrasts

The Merman's Children, Book Four, V.

We are still focusing more on the descriptions of nature than on what the characters are doing.

When Tauno and Niels ride on a common outside Copenhagen on "a sweet spring day" (p. 215):

new grass is "vivid" (ibid.);

leaves are "a green mist" (pp. 215-216);

the sky is "overarching blue" (p. 216);

storks return;

the breeze addresses three senses simultaneously because it is described as fresh, as loud and as "...full of damp odors." (ibid.);

hoofs thud.

The storks are not only part of the scenery but also symbols:

"...harbingers of summer, bearers of luck." (ibid.)

That is in the eyes of the beholders.

Contrast:

rain sluicing and brawling;

streets become rivers;

lightning flaring;

thunder sounding like "...huge wheels..." (p. 217);

wind whooping;

a tile stove heating a room;

candles lighting wainscot, hangings and carved furniture;

privacy behind closed doors;

the storm battering shutters during a conversational silence.

Then again:

"Spring rang wild with blossoms and birdsong, a season of love, a season of forgetfulness and farewells." (p. 219)

That is partly the season and partly what is happening to the characters.

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