Poul Anderson, World Without Stars, VII.
In the camp at night:
blackness;
a blue glow from the plankton energizer;
warm, dank, softly booming wind;
swamp odors;
whirring generator;
a beast's distant hoot;
lapping lake water;
rustling reeds;
Valland's omnisonor;
clear sky;
galactic glow, reflected by clouds, sheening on the lake;
the galaxy itself clearing the horizon;
Earth's spiral arm visible;
three other planets in this system;
no other heavenly bodies.
Kaor, Paul!
ReplyDeleteI assume the glow of the galaxy was sheening on the lake?
Sean
Sean,
ReplyDeleteYes. Was this unclear? I have decreased the size of the image to put "sheening" on the same line as "galactic glow."
Paul.
Kaor, Paul!
ReplyDeleteI don't think it was absolutely clear that was what you meant, hence my question.
Sean
Sean,
ReplyDeleteThere is a comma, not a semi-colon, after "clouds."
Paul.
Kaor, Paul!
ReplyDeleteI see that now. It was the originally large size of the illustration, breaking up your text, which caused my puzzlement.
Sean