Finding a memorable passage when rereading Poul Anderson's Mirkheim, I must check whether I have already posted about it and, sure enough, see "South Pacific Sunset," here.
However, I did not do full justice to this passage in that earlier post. After its first three sentences, ending with the reference to Venus, the opening paragraph continues:
"Beneath a lulling of waves, Ronga was wholly quiet. The day's odors of blossoms were fading away as air cooled."
-Poul Anderson, Mirkheim IN Anderson, Rise Of The Terran Empire (Riverdale, NY, 2011), pp. 1-291 AT p. 202.
In "South Pacific Sunset," my focus was on the sunset, thus on light and sky - including Venus - but I stopped there. The following two sentences, quoted above, add three more senses:
the sound of waves;
odors of blossoms;
cooling air.
In the second paragraph:
Chee Lan rides Adzel along a beach;
Adzel's scales shimmer;
Chee Lan's fur seems gilded;
palms glow against eastern violet;
David and Coya Falkayn, standing on the beach, look only at each other;
the team is about to leave Earth;
if they survive their mission to Hermes, Chee Lan intends to return to Cynthia "'For aye...'" (ibid.) and Adzel might return to Woden;
thus, the sunset is appropriate;
the beauty of Earth disturbs Chee Lan because she wants to be among "'...the living forests of Dao-Lai...'" (p. 203);
for Adzel, the sun is too dim and the horizons too narrow;
he shakes his head for no, a learned human gesture.
We cannot get enough of Anderson's descriptions but they seem to be endless, in any case. Like Chee Lan and Adzel, I approach the end of a day.
Kaor, Paul!
ReplyDeleteI agree, Poul Anderson frequently included very apt and telling details which hasty reading can easily miss. Including how non humans might react to Earth.
Sean
Sean,
ReplyDeleteI am about to add a detail to this post.
Paul.